这是我写的一首诗
I am the tall redwood trees that look over the mountains
I am the tornado of snow and dust that roams across the plain
I am the chirp of the first bird that rises
I am the cuddly panda that walks peacefully around the stalks of bamboo
I am the sweetness that enters your mouth when you take the first bite of a chocolate bar
I am the spring you feel after the harsh winter
You see, I am the life
I am the life of nature
妈妈喜欢这首美丽的诗！
ReplyDelete现在到院子里玩一会儿吧。妈妈
ReplyDelete瑶瑶，这首诗是妈妈特别喜欢的。 尤其是那一句I am the chirp of the first bird that rises。 我们试着把它翻译成中文好不好？
ReplyDelete很美的诗！继续，继续！
ReplyDeleteRita
瑶瑶，你写的诗阿姨非常喜欢，你很有诗人的天赋呢，继续多写啊！
ReplyDelete我最喜欢I am the tornado of snow and dust that roams across the plain，很有气势的。
小晖阿姨。
写得太好了. 浑然天成. 我每句都喜欢.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good poem mixed wit ha lots of key points.
ReplyDeleteAlthough it doesn't rhythm but this is a very well written piece of literature.