Out of the Box
Summer Camp
By Jade Zhang
Last week, I went to a Summer Camp called "Out of the Box". It was a very enjoyable camp! I used boxes of all shapes and sizes to make a shield, "Jade's Wonderful Armor", a spear, a mace, two whips, a knife, and this gigantic weird spacesuit thingy. It was fun, Fun, FUN!
A wonderful factor of this camp was where it was held-the Ardenwood Historic Farm! I watched a bunch of awesome animals, rode on a train pulled by a horse, and had a tour of the 150 year old Patterson house!
On the first day of camp, I had a tour of the farm. On the second day, I watched the great movie Ferngulley.On the third day, I had a tour of the Patterson house! On Thursday, I worked on my cardboard things and on Friday, I finished the projects.
This was a very fun camp. I enjoyed myself a lot! I would like to thank the counselors for their hard work in helping me have a fantastic time.
A wonderful factor of this camp was where it was held-the Ardenwood Historic Farm! I watched a bunch of awesome animals, rode on a train pulled by a horse, and had a tour of the 150 year old Patterson house!
On the first day of camp, I had a tour of the farm. On the second day, I watched the great movie Ferngulley.On the third day, I had a tour of the Patterson house! On Thursday, I worked on my cardboard things and on Friday, I finished the projects.
This was a very fun camp. I enjoyed myself a lot! I would like to thank the counselors for their hard work in helping me have a fantastic time.
thanks Jade for sharing your experience. I am glad you enjoyed this camp.
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BTW, it seems to me it will flow better if you switch the 2nd and 3rd paragraph. What do you think?
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